SamuraiOwl's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[dessert of the UFO]

Hey, it's got potential. However, you need to add a lot more harmony, fillers, variation, etc. Like I said, it's got potential, but it needs work.
Try listening to choral music - trust me, it really helps when it comes to harmony.
Also, there are a lot of great plugins that you can use for free. Cakewalk has a really great bass guitar and strings section, and if you have an audio interface, you can use spitfire labs.

PreSonus AudioBox USB 96: https://www.presonus.com/products/AudioBox-USB-96

Spitfire Labs: https://www.spitfireaudio.com/labs

Some good electronic music: https://samuraiowl.bandcamp.com

Good luck!!

Dj-cd responds:

Thanks, I will try it. My next song wll have much more potential, i got experience. Pls check and Review my new song!
Pd: Sorry for my english, I speak spanish

[Octanum - FireSharp (Dubstep)]

The percussion is a little overwhelming and the chorus feels really empty. However, the song has potential.
Try adding harmony and countermelodies. They really fill up the song and make it feel rich. Also, what helped me was singing bass in a choir, because it helped me hear all the parts and how they fit together. My music is infinitely richer now because of it - it used to be 1 or 2 instruments and percussion, and that's it. Now I'll have 8 or 9 instruments with multiple lines on each, not including percussion.
Like I said, the song has potential and sounds like legit dubstep. Just needs some harmony and more of a consistent tune, as well as a little less repitition. Keep it up!

Acri responds:

thanks for the feedback! by the way, I made this as an experiment and more or less of a joke, and was intended to be repetitive. In my next song, I'll try some of your tips. ;)