Octanum - kasquer Yeet, pretty beast!! Very funny. Like it! I have the same suggestions that I had for your other song I reviewed, FireSharp, but this one is better fill-wise.
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F-777 - Dragon Fight (2015) Love it! Could havhave heavier drops and more bass, but it is a lot of fun. Plus I love the fact that you actually have a BandCamp page! I will definitely follow you there. Love your stuff! Can't wait to hear more!
F-777 - Shock Rave Pretty good. Feels full, feels fun, feel funky. However, there could definitely be more bass and heavier drops. Try listening to Pegboard Nerds or Terminite. Your style is a lot like theirs, and I really like it. Keep it up!
Teminite - Hold On This is still my absolute favourite song - this and Stormbringer, but that's not on NG. I love the message, love the music, love the maker. You're awesome, dude!
P.S. PLEEEEEAAAAASE put Stormbringer on Newgrounds!
Evilwave & Teminite - Mutant (feat. Prey for Me) Holy. Freaking. Crap.
Love your stuff, dude! This song very much satisfies my thirst for dubstep...and makes me want more at the same time.
(Is that possible? I dunno...)
Teminite - Unstoppable Epic! Though I wish the bass drops were harder...and more frequent.
Octanum - FireSharp (Dubstep) The percussion is a little overwhelming and the chorus feels really empty. However, the song has potential.
Try adding harmony and countermelodies. They really fill up the song and make it feel rich. Also, what helped me was singing bass in a choir, because it helped me hear all the parts and how they fit together. My music is infinitely richer now because of it - it used to be 1 or 2 instruments and percussion, and that's it. Now I'll have 8 or 9 instruments with multiple lines on each, not including percussion.
Like I said, the song has potential and sounds like legit dubstep. Just needs some harmony and more of a consistent tune, as well as a little less repitition. Keep it up!
Acri responds:
thanks for the feedback! by the way, I made this as an experiment and more or less of a joke, and was intended to be repetitive. In my next song, I'll try some of your tips. ;)
Milk Drops Like it a lot, very bouncy and catchy, but no bass drops AT ALL. Are we allowed to use this in ANY videos? Thanks!
Vengeance Fighter Not as good as your other tracks, though I Iike the tune.
Drifting Dimensions It's decent. Pretty empty though, I was expecting a waaay harder bass drop. Plus the bass drum is lacking.
